Ecrit le : 20/02/2006 18:48 -

voilà, en fait j'ai une toute petite rédaction d'anglais à faire pour la rentrée et je voulais savoir si quelqu'un parlant très bien voir couramment l'anglais pourrait me dire les fautes que j'ai faites

Ecrit le : 20/02/2006 18:58 -

Faudrait que tu écrives le texte si tu veux qu'on trouve les erreurs.. non ?

Ecrit le : 20/02/2006 19:06 -

je mets le texte demain.

pour l'instant je voudrais juste savoir si quelqu'un pourrait m'aider

Ecrit le : 20/02/2006 20:25 -

Mets là, tu verras bien.

Ecrit le : 20/02/2006 23:06 -

Moi je veux bien essayer tant qu'il ne s'agit pas de la faire.

Ecrit le : 21/02/2006 01:48 -

idem tant que c en est pas d el espagnol

Ecrit le : 21/02/2006 11:30 -

voilà le texte:

after having studied the interviews of these three persons, I will say to you, in my turn, how I see myself at the age of 25.
First of all, as I'm planning to do journalism studies, I will see myself well as a radiophonic journalist, and more precisely in the sport's field because it's one of my favourites leisure.
Concerning my future family, I don't see it very large. Maybe one child.
In ten years, I hope to keep the same friends that now, even if I know it will be very difficult.
Physically, I think I will not change much, and I wouldn't like to change my character.
Finally, even if I like Auxerre, and especially her football team, I think if I've the opportunity to make journalim studies, I will have to leave this city for one larger, like Marseille or Paris for example

Ecrit le : 21/02/2006 22:48 -

Bon, correction:
After studying the interviews of these three people, I will now tell you how I see myself at the age of 25.
First of all, as I'm planning to do journalism studies, I can see myself well as a radiophonic reporter, particularly in the sport's field because it is one of my favourite leisure.
Concerning my future family, I don't plan to have a big one. Maybe one child.
In ten years, I hop I will have kept the friends I have now, even if I know it will be very difficult.
Physically, I don't think I will change that much, and I hope my character will not change either.
Finally, even if I like Auxerre, and especially its football team, I think ... le reste c'est bon!

after having studied the interviews of these three persons, I will say to you, in my turn, how I see myself at the age of 25.
First of all, as I'm planning to do journalism studies, I will see myself well as a radiophonic journalist, and more precisely in the sport's field because it's one of my favourites leisure.
Concerning my future family, I don't see it very large. Maybe one child.
In ten years, I hope to keep the same friends that now, even if I know it will be very difficult.
Physically, I think I will not change much, and I wouldn't like to change my character.
Finally, even if I like Auxerre, and especially her football team, I think if I've the opportunity to make journalim studies, I will have to leave this city for one larger, like Marseille or Paris for example

Ecrit le : 21/02/2006 23:51 -

rien a rajouter (surtotu la flemme de lire triskelle ^^)

Ecrit le : 22/02/2006 13:05 -

merci triskelle!

Ecrit le : 22/02/2006 13:09 -

Ma femme, c'est de LA femme.

Ecrit le : 22/02/2006 13:34 -

trans.voila.fr ton traducteur ?

Ecrit le : 24/02/2006 02:29 -

si c'est à moi que tu parles Sarc, non.

De rien dedech!!

Ecrit le : 28/02/2006 11:28 -

pfeuh, j'me fous je fais la même chose en Allemand

Ecrit le : 28/02/2006 19:03 -

Oui, on sait que Kiss est très à l'aise avec les langues...